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I already played your game but haven't reached to comment yet. I moderately enjoyed your game. Especially I like when people dares to include a boss also because boss is often one of the most important things in a game that finishes it.
The biggest critizism to your game by me would be that you should fix a language in your game. I know. Also mine is not perfect and Christian Game Maker have even mentioned it. I even don't see much problem with it because who reaches to be that decent every time when English is not the main language... There are more than one people to respond often.
However, your game is your official release, your achievement and there you should show more decency. Try to use Google translate, some programs that are able to fix grammar and read your own text. You also can write outside Platform Builder and paste easily later. Hope you agree.
Write about your game also in the forums!